Hi Hunter I really liked your post. Next time try to spell some of the words right. I play Clash of Clan too and my base is very good. Cats are very very snuggly as well because I have a cat. Her name is Bella.
I am Michael from South Hornby School. Good work Hunter I really like the way you used the adjectives in the Tim is a Firefighter story. Next time try not to put too much detail about your character. I like your adjectives.
Kia ora Hunter, I like your poems. I think you could check the spelling in the clash of clans poem, you spelled a few things wrong, for example “Cannons” not “canns” and “bombs” not “boms”. Our class have blogs also, we need feedback, come check it out. Overall a really good poem and blog.
Hi Hunter I really liked your post. Next time try to spell some of the words right. I play Clash of Clan too and my base is very good. Cats are very very snuggly as well because I have a cat. Her name is Bella.
ReplyDeleteI am Michael from South Hornby School. Good work Hunter I really like the way you used the adjectives in the Tim is a Firefighter story. Next time try not to put too much detail about your character. I like your adjectives.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Hunter, I like your poems. I think you could check the spelling in the clash of clans poem, you spelled a few things wrong, for example “Cannons” not “canns” and “bombs” not “boms”. Our class have blogs also, we need feedback, come check it out. Overall a really good poem and blog.
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